- Show our group members our blog posts so far
- Express any concerns that could be resolved/ acknowledged
- Give each other general/ specific feedback or advice on the parts of the project we are currently on
Thursday, February 29, 2024
WEEK 4- The First Group Meeting
Sunday, February 25, 2024
Societal Structure
Hello blog. This post is going to be more of a pondering space for my wandering mind! In less sarcastic tone, I have questions that form while I dive deeper into the plot of our story, which directly relates to the opening and what we will include in the first two minutes of our film. While thinking about the concept of social experiments and explanations for aspects of our story/ chosen characteristics, I came up with a list of questions that I wrote down on my notes app (previously mentioned in my “Social Experiment- Intro” blog post). In addition to those questions, over the past few days ere are a few that lead to other connected questions:
• Why is the mother (tentative name: Beth) doing the social experiments (apart from the obvious questions of what are they testing), and what makes her actions morally okay?
• Why did the social experiments begin?
• What time period are we thinking for the movie to be set in, and does that imply we are trying to say about that futuristic world/ our current society?
•What is the backstory of our dystopian world? Is it a future version of our current world, or is completely disconnected?
Societal Structure
With these questions, I was able to begin to establish some characteristics of our dystopian world that relates to our previous plot points of experimenting on children. While we previously thought that the world would be pretty similar to our current one, after genre research on dystopian fiction (literature and film), we decided to implement some characteristics. To start, the conflict of governmental control is one that we want to possibly connect to the secret experimentation group. In other words, the "independent" organization will be secretly funded by the government/ aligned with the government, as imposing threat coming from more than one source ( government, secret society) could be interesting. Additionally, the actual rules of the society, or the society's "normal" includes the following:
- Children are seen as vessels for adult progress, not as valuable for overall future development/ continuation.
- Children are exploited, with kids as young as 10 going out into the world to work and serve.
- There are some that don't agree with exploitation: protests.
- The system of bringing babies into the world consists of surveillance and control- illegal to independently have baby/ not put in system of work, etc...)
- There is a specific job dedicated to women: "babymakers". They have to get pregnant (artificial insemination) and continuously reproduce, so that a majority of children can serve the current adult population (still not quite sure how that would've come to be- this system couldn't have been in use for long as the exploited kids grow up to be adults, not stay children together and the current adults grow and eventually pass away.)
- Possible scientific progression that allows one to dictate gender of baby to birth could be found (has to do with experiments...)
- Quite literally ageism.
- Is it okay for owner/company head (Beth, mom of Doran) to be doing this to her own kids (if society creates distant relationship between children and adults in nature of system)?
- Is it okay to do something because its accepted by society?
- Authority questions: Who dictates what's "right"/"wrong"? Does a persons "label"/ position grant them automatic justification/ trust?
Saturday, February 24, 2024
Plot
Hello blog. After researching genre characteristics of our now definitive genre(s), I wanted to prioritize (other than the approach/film opening research), the plot. In last weeks blog post "Social Experiment- Intro", I stated a possible plot idea that originated from an 8th grade script writing assignment. As I stated before, I'm thankful for my 13 year old's boredom as she was stuck indoors, clearly searching for escapism and entertainment as she began to conjure up a fictional storm of experimentation and action. Anyways, Isabel and I have come a long way this week developing elements of the plot, so I decided to dedicate this post to sharing the progress we've made, and also to show that there are still many blank spots waiting to be filled in!
In-class Development
Storyline
Friday, February 23, 2024
Genre Research: Dystopian Fiction
The genre of dystopian fiction is one that is not only common in films/TV, with some of the most popular including the film-series Divergent, a story following a young adult Tris Prior in a futuristic world where society is divided into 5 factions, in which she is considered different (can't fit into one faction- a Divergent), the film The Matrix starring Keanu Reeves, and even TV shows like Black Mirror that explore how the ranges of humanity/ human nature intersect with the extremities of modern-day life. Apart from the necessary production elements necessary to create a futuristic/ specific world such as set design, makeup, lighting, etc... I want to dive into the history of dystopian fiction, as well as different related concepts.
When did Dystopian Fiction Start?
To investigate about dystopian fiction's beginnings, we have to understand when the idea of a dystopia, and opposing term 'utopia' came up. According to electricliterature.com (click here for specific article) the concept of a utopia initiated the contrasting concept of dystopia, with the first mention of an imagined place/ state of things that appear to be perfect (UTOPIA) in 1516 by Sir Thomas More, with people concluding that this fantastical land of perfection is nothing we know, meaning it doesn't/ will never exist. This leads to the eventual use of the word 'dystopia' in 1868 by John Stuart Mill, taking over 50 years for the word to begin to be more actively responded to in public conscious, meaning an imagined place where everything is bad/ overly controlled/ degraded/ totalitarian (UTOPIA).
Relating to it's integration into a genre, and fictional stories, literature about an ideal world that we wish to live in were the major relation to utopias, until the Russian book "We" came out during the 1920's (1921). This book paved the way for other classic dystopian literature such as "Brave New World" and "1984", as it introduced traditional tropes such as unresolved endings and an intense, totalitarian government that largely conflicts with its' people. After, this the first major dystopian film Metropolis (1927) came out, enforcing tropes like class division (workers rebelling against higher classes) and new technological dangers.
Characteristics
- Loss of Individuality
- Oppression
- Government Control- Propaganda/ Censorship
- Technology
- Fear of citizens
- Environmental Disaster
Quick Reflection
Sunday, February 18, 2024
Social Experiment- Intro
Hello. After a long discussion of researching different dystopian openings and some general scenes of dystopian-like pieces, we are closer than ever to establishing our genre to be a dystopia. After the day in class with Isabel and I discussed in the previous blog, I was flooded with ideas and rather conceptual questions that I'm not yet ready to answer but hope to in the process of coming up with a plot/ choosing our approach for the opening, which will begin next week. Being the dedicated notetaker I am, I wrote them down on my notes app, not being able to wait till I had access to pen and paper as I was afraid the ideas would slip from my mind files. This blog post is dedicated to some of those thoughts, and additional discussions with Isabel as we began to get excited about our collaborative project...
Possible Plot Idea
As we began to think of how we would come up with an inventive and new "dystopian-like" plot, I remembered that in eighth grade, for a Film 1 script writing project, I created a fictional film called "The Social Experiment". While I didn't write nearly the whole script and only a few first scenes, I remember the plot (not fully developed as by eighth-grade self only had the main parts in mind for my assignment): A mother of several children is the manager of a secret company that aims to answer questions through social experiments. The mother also includes her children in this, with Tucan ( I know a weird name) being the lead. The children are all isolated from society and each other, exposed to different resources and limited to outside contact and modern-day technologies. As the time comes, Tucan is finally allowed to go out into the world, but what he doesn't know is that his mom is planting a chip in his backpack to see and track society's responses to his abnormalities (being raised abnormally on purpose). While that's only a very short synopsis, that's the general introductory idea. We will consider portions of this to possibly adapt into our actual film and in effect opening. Below are pictures of the script I made in 8th grade:
Saturday, February 17, 2024
Choosing our genre
Brainstorming
Before discussing collective ideas with Isabel, I began to brainstorm on my own. I thought of different films and pieces that really intrigued me, with common genres being two: psychological dramas and dystopias. In a previous blog, I wrote about the genre characteristics and further research about the subgenre of the big umbrella that is a "drama", psychological dramas. You can access that blog posting here. The idea of translating people's thoughts and intense emotions (a big takeaway when I watch dramas in general) into the medium of film and making sensitively articulate choices that truly reflect a character's/ multiple characters' state, with that being the central focus really pulls me in. As that is a major objective of our 2-minute opening (pulling the audience in), I began to truly consider that genre.
Secondly, the genre that is dystopia has always attracted me as well. The societal questions that can be raised from one specific plot and the execution of that plot are so effective and impactful (obviously depending on the piece of work at hand). While I haven't yet truly dived into the historical context of the world of dystopian film, I have dwelled in dystopian literature, reading books in my Language Arts classes like Fahrenheit 451, with deep and annotated analysis teaching me about the real-life application/ effect of fictional stories on society. In the book, one of Ray Bradbury's (the author) messages relates to the real-life act of book burning, and how books are our saviors with knowledge that shouldn't be censored/ kept at the hands of the authority. With that being one example, dystopias have always given me a feeling of questioning that I am very open to about our society and not-so-distant futures.
In-Class Research
During class, Isabel and I finally got a chance to sit down and share our ideas. We began to run through specific genres and listed them as "yes" or "no" based on a few judgments: what approach do film openings of the discussed genre usually take and would we be able to fully execute the discussed genre's opening in a successful/ fulfilling way with our available resources/ rather limited experience?
Isabel and I have done almost all group projects for this school year together (in this class), with some being found in my blogs. I know we work well together and have similar interests when it comes to distinctive creative ideas/ feelings we want to exude. We began to list genres such as action, dystopia, drama, and even comedy. After discussing for some minutes, we began to look at specific openings for certain movies with these genres, primarily focusing on action and dystopia.
Specific Film Openings
The main goal of watching different film openings was to see how not only did the opening relate to the whole movie (as we watched film openings of films we have seen)- did it alludes to future moments of the plot, how the approach represents chosen aspect (tone, character, setting) and relation of that to audience perception impact for rest of movie... BUT also to observe the different avenues we can take for our own opening.
The first opening we watched was of the movie Divergent, which originates from the novel (part of a famous trilogy). The genre of the movie is also science fiction, one example of possible connections we can make to other genres, also relying on aspects of action to complement the heightened stakes. This opening, which you can access here, starts off by displaying the production company and director titles, followed by the title of the film. During this calm and intriguing first few seconds, the pan of a vast field is exposed, listing credit titles accompanied by instrumental music, both repetitive in notes and alluring. The vast view of the outside of a city is then shot-by-shot led into the actual city (of Chicago), already communicating the film's large scale and establishing location (and further context later in the opening). In my notes, while watching the opening, I thought that it felt sophisticated and professional, mainly because of the rather still and non-rushing intro. The zooming out/in displays the setting and their societal circumstances, giving further context. The possible approach that I got from that opening was to give time for the audience to adjust to the world being created in our film, as the opening's pace made me feel eased into their world, also shown through the movie The Maze Runner's opening.
Another opening we watched was of The Truman Show, a 1998 comedy/ sci-fi film that also is included in genres of psychological drama and dystopia. Being one of my favorite movies, it was interesting to go back and see the opening and reconnect it to the plot of the overall movie. This opening, which you can access right overrrrrrrrrr here, has no strong action shots, displaying almost all medium/ close-up shots of important characters of the movie, such as Christof (the outsider), Marlon, Meryl Burbank, and of course Truman himself. The approach to this opening is that of character development, as Christof breaks the fourth wall to let the audience in on an instantly personal and targeted feel. As the music builds, the "credits" roll in (limited), which I found really interesting. This movie is of course a particular case, but the credits act (such as "Hannah Gill as meryl") as the cast of the Truman Show that the actual movie is about, not the cast of the movie "The Truman Show"(if that made any sense).
The last opening we looked at was of the 2021 Marvel movie, Black Widow. This is the one that I was most inspired by/ most impacted by, as I haven't watched the movie and felt immediately impacted. After Isabel explained some context of the strongly action-filled movie, the opening's darker tone, giving context through visuals, makes sense concerning the main character Natasha's personal life experiences. The opening is intense, with stings and the credits playing back to back. The editing style and overall content shown begin the audience with questions yet understandings, as people are circled in red to indicate possible targets/ enemies. In general, this opening is one that I think we will be taking a lot of inspiration from, with the editing and specific approach intriguing audiences heavily. I also understood the intention of making the audience feel like they're in on a "secret", as the main character's background isn't explicitly stated yet intensely introduced right before even meeting the present-day character, already creating a connection to her and leaving room to relate back to the opening of her past ever comes up. You can access the opening here.
Other Watches
Other pieces we watched a part of were Don't Worry Darling, a 2022 thriller/ mystery film that harnesses dystopian tropes/ some underlying tones relevant to dystopias, and the Disney Plus show WandaVision, which also misleads the audience and has dystopian themes. In one scene of DWD, the main character Alice Chambers played by Florence Pugh traces the board of a model of the "town" (which we later find out to be... SPOILER ALERT... fabricated!) she "lives" in, with her finger tracing all the way to the edge of town, a sandy isolated area. While she does this innocently, she is alluding to her final actions of the trial of escape. I found this impactful looking back at it and might want to incorporate some element of detailed closeup (as her tracing finger was shown with a tight closeup) that will allude to/ communicate something of importance to the viewer. In regards to WandaVision, we watched the ending of Ep1, "Filmed Before a Live Studio Audience". It is very intriguing, completely throwing the audience off course of what they thought was the "whole picture" that the first episode displayed. It shocked me when I watched it, making me quite literally upset that my many questions couldn't be answered with another episode for a full week. The show's ability to intrigue an audience I think stems not only from the circumstances of the show but also the lack of contextual establishment for the audience stemming from character-character interaction.
Reflection
After viewing and discussing different openings of dystopian-like films/ films involving dystopian themes, I think that choosing between which "type of dystopia" is important for our piece and in turn opening. The choice between explicit societal problems that include grand action sequences or more implicit, almost creepily alluded-to issues until a final breakpoint (examples of opposing "tropes") is one that we have decided, after viewing parts of openings and endings of The Truman Show and WandaVision, that we possibly will leave questions in the air and not give everything away to the viewer, with our film not relying on action to stay interesting, but rather eerie topics like social experiments to intrigue an audience. We want to watch more dystopian films to get inspiration, with some including Children of Men and Oblivion.
Below is a picture of my notes from when we were watching the openings in class:
Friday, February 16, 2024
Let's get organized: Schedule
Before my partner Isabel and I begin to research what possible genre we could make our film, and or film opening about, we wanted to make a schedule for ourselves to have a visual guide (given to us by Mrs. Stoklosa) of our timeline, and blog topics that will also guide in our development of fundamental aspects for our opening.
Below is a link to our shared Word document where we have the timeline split into nine weeks of work, with each enlisting goals for the week and blog topics:
Sunday, February 11, 2024
THE TIME HAS COME...
Portfolio Project
- Establishing Tone Approach
- Character Development Approach
- Establish Background Approach
- Establish Setting Approach
- Establishing/ Type of Conflict Approach
- Create Mystery Approach
- Develop Technical Elements Approach
- The Film Opening
- The Blog
- The Creative Reflection